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Lolita. by ~Fwelshie-Laurine:iconFwelshie-Laurine:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Erotic > Open


I walk behind you,
Your purfume filling my
Lungs. The pleasure I get
Disturbs me. I feel like
The dirty old man in the
Cinema, a decrepit
Voyeur. Watching, never taking part.

I watch you from afar,
Admiring. I don't know
Your name but I know
You, your habits all
Catalogued in my
Mind for future reference.
Just in case.

I play Humbert to your
Lolita and vomit. But
Like a dog I return to it,
Return to You.
On all fours praying
You never need to know.

I smile at you when
I pass you by, my
Secret addiction to your
Unusual beauty sated.
Until the day you will
Smile back, forcing me to flee.
©2006-2009 ~Fwelshie-Laurine
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~xSwEetxBlAsPheMyx Oct 12, 2006, 7:58:37 AM
wow, i like this very much, i like the way you break the lines it attracts me very much, shows an irregularity in the way the poet is thinking so perfectly. also in love with the hopeless self disgust of the first stanza and definate favourite. x

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I am just a good
for nothing - companion
of moon and flower

- Bill Wyatt
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~greenmorbid Oct 17, 2006, 5:36:44 AM
Now this is a good poem.. i really like it!!!!the self disgust, unusual imagery, the whole theme in general, i really like it ...REALLY!. This is the type of love/obsesson that should be written about alot more, and your spot on with it... the emotions.. the unusual behaviour that developes/characteristics shown... BRILLIANT! ***** lol

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pahshroom~ it looks like a pah and tastes like a pah, but its actually a mushroom!
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~Fwelshie-Laurine Oct 17, 2006, 5:37:13 AM
oh thank you so much, so very complimented.

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It may not be proven but it's a scientific fact << >>

"I'm not Drunk, I'm Tom!" :drunk:
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~greenmorbid Oct 17, 2006, 5:37:25 AM
by the way who is this poem about.. or is it a collection of people??

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pahshroom~ it looks like a pah and tastes like a pah, but its actually a mushroom!
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~Fwelshie-Laurine Oct 17, 2006, 5:38:08 AM
now this is the kind of comment i like!!! thanks for the fave! lipsick :glomp:

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It may not be proven but it's a scientific fact << >>

"I'm not Drunk, I'm Tom!" :drunk:
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~Fwelshie-Laurine Oct 17, 2006, 5:38:52 AM
oh no-one in particular.... hehehe i am mysterious.

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It may not be proven but it's a scientific fact << >>

"I'm not Drunk, I'm Tom!" :drunk:
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~greenmorbid Oct 17, 2006, 5:39:45 AM
ahhhh come on!

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pahshroom~ it looks like a pah and tastes like a pah, but its actually a mushroom!
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~Fwelshie-Laurine Oct 17, 2006, 5:40:25 AM
shut up you.

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It may not be proven but it's a scientific fact << >>

"I'm not Drunk, I'm Tom!" :drunk:
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~greenmorbid Oct 17, 2006, 5:42:28 AM
lipsick?? yay you FINALLY got your grant! buy me something pretty! my lecture wasnt on... after all that :disbelief: no problem i appreciate good art.. this is up there with the guitar string flower! just brill!

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pahshroom~ it looks like a pah and tastes like a pah, but its actually a mushroom!
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