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I drink glass after glass
Of pungent water,
Open and swallow it whole.
Consume for the sake of consumption.
I want gravity to pull me back
To Earth.
I need to feel its force
Its solidity beneath me.

All too soon my wish is granted.
©2007-2009 ~Fwelshie-Laurine
:iconfwelshie-laurine:

Author's Comments

I hav'nt written anything in a while so I set myself the task of writing a poem about anything at all (I'm obviously not very good at setting goals) so I thought about the most basic thing I tend to do on a regular basis (or used to do) and it was, surprise surprise, drinking.

Genrally how I feel on a night out - floaty and giggly, sick and want to stop floating, floor.

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:iconaraiya-mintaka:
That's actaully pretty good. XDDD Whee! I'm fluing! Thunk! Floor.
:iconfwelshie-laurine:
hehehe I just need to write something.

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It may not be proven but it's a scientific fact << >>

"I'm not Drunk, I'm Tom!" :drunk:
:iconxxthecresentmoonxx:
I really like it!! Neat concept ^^

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KuroxFai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:iconthe-driller:
i like it,
at first i thought it was about water and didn't get it at all.
i understand it now though.
:)

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""Oh Woeful One of endless sight, beyond the veils of Time,
Of Grand Darkness you are the keeper,
My Soul is black, and Black as Night are the ways of Thine,
Wield the Scythe of the, SoulReaper........"
:iconfwelshie-laurine:
thanks for the faves!!! ^^

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It may not be proven but it's a scientific fact << >>

"I'm not Drunk, I'm Tom!" :drunk:
:iconfwelshie-laurine:
hehehe its me using metaphor... okay not really but dont you dare correct me.
I think very few people would read that poem and not get it in the end.
ahhh drunkenness how i miss thee.

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It may not be proven but it's a scientific fact << >>

"I'm not Drunk, I'm Tom!" :drunk:
:iconthe-driller:
ya, the word "Water" threw me off.
:)

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""Oh Woeful One of endless sight, beyond the veils of Time,
Of Grand Darkness you are the keeper,
My Soul is black, and Black as Night are the ways of Thine,
Wield the Scythe of the, SoulReaper........"
:iconfwelshie-laurine:
its would i suppose. *Ponders meaning of universe*

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It may not be proven but it's a scientific fact << >>

"I'm not Drunk, I'm Tom!" :drunk:

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