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Guilty - 7even by ~Fwelshie-Laurine:iconFwelshie-Laurine:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


Seven deadly sins,
Seven saintly virtues,
Seven years old and undecided about the two.

Attention seeker feeling ignored,
Hungry for drama in
A shop full of sugar.
Trouble waiting to happen,
Waiting until parents backs are turned.

With all childish Greed readied,
A fat little fist dives into the lowest
Most colourful sweet drawer.
Emerging sugar coated and triumphant.

I ate my prize furtively. The sweetened goo
Sharing my mouth with my heart. Rat like glances,
Tuned for the alarm to sound.
But no, with an obedient trot and smile
I answer mothers call, escape free into sunlight

And throw up.
©2007-2009 ~Fwelshie-Laurine
:iconfwelshie-laurine:

Author's Comments

Okay I hate this catagory thing, I'm really bad at it.

anyway, childhood memory of my first "crime".

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:icondynastophic:
~dynastophic Feb 28, 2007, 12:43:17 PM
Ahahaha. Thats very good. I have never done that myself but I understand hehe. Good work :)

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So my dignity could be saved,
I left my feathers for the blade.
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~Firechild21894 Feb 28, 2007, 12:49:30 PM
Hehe. =) That's cute! :+fav:

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Nothing can brighten.. or ruin.. my day like you can.
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~Fwelshie-Laurine Mar 1, 2007, 10:24:17 AM
awww thank you for the fave! ^_^

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It may not be proven but it's a scientific fact << >>

"I'm not Drunk, I'm Tom!" :drunk:
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~Fwelshie-Laurine Mar 1, 2007, 10:26:20 AM
Thanks for the fave, I browsed through your gallery and it means alot coming from someone as talented as you.

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It may not be proven but it's a scientific fact << >>

"I'm not Drunk, I'm Tom!" :drunk:
:icondynastophic:
~dynastophic Mar 1, 2007, 11:50:56 AM
Um... thanks :)

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So my dignity could be saved,
I left my feathers for the blade.
:iconfirechild21894:
~Firechild21894 Mar 1, 2007, 2:53:21 PM
=) No problem! I really liked it!

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Nothing can brighten.. or ruin.. my day like you can.
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~XxthecresentmoonXx Mar 3, 2007, 8:46:59 AM
Ooo! This is really cool! I love your writing ^^

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KuroxFai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:iconfwelshie-laurine:
~Fwelshie-Laurine Mar 7, 2007, 12:26:35 PM
wow, thanks a lot! ^^ cant wait to see some more of your stuff!

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It may not be proven but it's a scientific fact << >>

"I'm not Drunk, I'm Tom!" :drunk:
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